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诗歌正文

旧版本		新版本
1	I lit a cigarette, by window sitting,	1	I lit a cigarette, by window sitting,
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3	lost in my thoughts my gaze before me drifted,	2	lost in my thoughts my gaze before me drifted,
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5	around my head smoke clouds to dusk retreating,	3	around my head smoke clouds to dusk retreating,
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7	my soul by florid reminiscence wafted.	4	my soul by florid reminiscence wafted.
8		5
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11	When – maybe by the flight of thought uplifted	6	When – maybe by the flight of thought uplifted
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13	or with the rising blue smoke tide abetting –	7	or with the rising blue smoke tide abetting –
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15	a young girl’s form my far off gaze was greeting,	8	a young girl’s form my far off gaze was greeting,
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17	pouting, a pair of smiling lips she shifted…	9	pouting, a pair of smiling lips she shifted…
18		10
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21	How beauty charmed her locks forever sable!	11	How beauty charmed her locks forever sable!
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23	To kiss, to kiss, to kiss, her sensual calling –	12	To kiss, to kiss, to kiss, her sensual calling –
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25	what strained in twain beneath lace braiding able.	13	what strained in twain beneath lace braiding able.
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29	How in a joyful dream the head spins, reeling…	15	How in a joyful dream the head spins, reeling…
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31	I blew the smoke… Oh woe, oh woe apalling!	16	I blew the smoke… Oh woe, oh woe apalling!
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33	Dusk coldly barren squinted back, unfeeling.	17	Dusk coldly barren squinted back, unfeeling.

译者 [ ~~Václav Z J Pinkava~~ ⟹瓦茨拉夫·平卡瓦]