威廉·布莱克 A Dream 编辑历史
- 2年前 传灯 更改了诗歌正文
旧版本 新版本 4 Where on grass methought I lay. 4 Where on grass methought I lay. 5 5 Troubled, wildered and forlorn, 6 Troubled, wildered and forlorn, 8 All heart-broke I heard her say: 9 All heart-broke I heard her say: 10 9 'Oh, my children, do they cry? 11 'Oh, my children, do they cry? 12 Now return and weep for me.' 14 Now return and weep for me.' 15 13 Pitying, I dropped a tear; 16 Pitying, I dropped a tear; 16 Calls the watchman of the night? 19 Calls the watchman of the night? 20 17 'I am set to light the ground, 21 'I am set to light the ground, - 4年前 王负剑 添加了初始版本