大卫·怀特  Enough  编辑历史

1. 1个月前   停云  更改了
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   1	Enough.	1	Enough. These few words are enough.
   2	These few words are enough.
   3	If not these words, this breath.	2	If not these words, this breath.
   4	If not this breath, this sitting here.	3	If not this breath, this sitting here.
   		4
   5	This opening to the life	5	This opening to the life
   8	until now.	8	until now.
   		9
   9	Until now.	10	Until now.

2. 1个月前   李大侠  更改了
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   5	This opening to the life	5	This opening to the life
   6	we have refused	6	we have refused
   7	again and again	7	again and again
   8	until now.	8	until now.
   9	Until now.	9	Until now.

3. 1个月前   李大侠  更改了
   来源 [ https://sites.udmercy.edu/poetry/2016/05/27/enough-these-few-words-are-enough-david-whyte/ ⟹ https://www.upaya.org/wp-content/uploads/2021/05/Enough-by-David-Whyte.pdf ]
4. 1个月前   李大侠  更改了
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   旧版本		新版本
   1	Enough. These few words are enough.	1	Enough.
   		2	These few words are enough.
   2	If not these words, this breath.	3	If not these words, this breath.
   4	This opening to the life	5	This opening to the life
   5	we have refused	6	we have refused
   6	again and again	7	again and again
   7	until now.	8	until now.
   		9	Until now.

5. 1个月前   李大侠  添加了初始版本