Amy Clampitt Archaic Figure 编辑历史
- 2年前 传灯 更改了诗歌正文
旧版本 新版本 1 Headless in East Berlin, no goddess 1 Headless in East Berlin, no goddess 2 but a named mere girl (Ornithe, ``Little Bird'')2 but a named mere girl (Ornithe, "Little Bird'') 3 out of the rubble, six centuries underneath 3 out of the rubble, six centuries underneath 4 the plinth of what we quaintly call 4 the plinth of what we quaintly call 5 5 8 laid open onto—sterile as an operating table, 8 laid open onto—sterile as an operating table, 9 past the closed incision of the Wall— 9 past the closed incision of the Wall— 10 10 13 halfway across the globe, we'd left behind: 13 halfway across the globe, we'd left behind: 14 projection, factor, yield, the quantifiable 14 projection, factor, yield, the quantifiable 15 15 18 nurture there were those of us who ran away from 18 nurture there were those of us who ran away from 19 toward another, earlier, bonier 19 toward another, earlier, bonier 20 20 21 one, another middle of the earth, yearned-for stepmotherland of 21 one, another middle of the earth, yearned-for stepmotherland of 22 H ÷lderlin and Goethe:22 Hölderlin and Goethe: 23 sunlight and grief, the cypress and the 23 sunlight and grief, the cypress and the 24 crucifix, the vivid poverty 24 crucifix, the vivid poverty 25 25 28 strolling the sad northern drizzle, in 28 strolling the sad northern drizzle, in 29 the uprooted Turks' quasi-bazaar, 29 the uprooted Turks' quasi-bazaar, 30 30 33 chitoned stillness the cold chrism of a time 33 chitoned stillness the cold chrism of a time 34 that saw—or so to us it seems— 34 that saw—or so to us it seems— 35 35 38 have since become. Who stands there headless. 38 have since become. Who stands there headless. 39 Barbar, she would have called us all. 39 Barbar, she would have called us all. - 2年前 传灯 添加了初始版本