诺曼·麦凯格 BOOKWORM 编辑历史
- 2年前 传灯 更改了诗歌正文
旧版本 新版本 4 the same as the first one. 4 the same as the first one. 5 5 The waves of the sea 6 The waves of the sea 6 annoy me, they bore me; 7 annoy me, they bore me; 7 why aren ’t they divided8 why aren't they divided 8 in paragraphs? 9 in paragraphs? 10 9 I look at the night 11 I look at the night 10 and make nothing of it –12 and make nothing of it - 11 those black pages 13 those black pages 12 with no print. 14 with no print. 15 13 But I love the gothic script 16 But I love the gothic script 14 of pinetrees and 17 of pinetrees and 15 on the pond the light ’s18 on the pond the light's 16 fancy italics. 19 fancy italics. 17 And the cherry tree’s petals – 20 21 And the cherry tree's petals - 18 they make 22 they make 20 their dying fall. 24 their dying fall. 21 But it’s strange, girl, how I come back 25 26 But it's strange, girl, how I come back 22 from the library of everything 27 from the library of everything 23 to stare and stare at 28 to stare and stare 24 the closed book of you. 29 at the closed book of you. 30 25 When will you open to me 31 When will you open to me - 2年前 传灯 添加了初始版本