张若轩 For This Is Not the End 编辑历史
- 4年前 张若轩 更改了日 [
⟹ 25 ]年 [⟹ 2022 ]月 [⟹ 6 ]写作地点 [⟹ Cleveland ] - 4年前 张若轩 更改了诗歌正文
旧版本 新版本 7 l wonder if l must rewrite our love 7 l wonder if l must rewrite our love 8 like birches suspending in the midair of this cloudy late summer valley, 8 like birches suspending in the midair 9 of this cloudy late summer valley, 9 luxuriant, but doomed to pause growing soon. 10 luxuriant, but doomed to pause growing soon. 21 22 22 Until then, I will climb along the backside of the mountain between us, 23 Until then, I will climb along the backside 23 like your kisses climbing on the back of my hands last summer. 24 of the mountain between us, 25 like your kisses climbing on the back 26 of my hands last summer. 24 And I will hand over my cool dry rein to you, my dear. 27 And I will hand over my cool dry rein to you, my dear. 25 We shall ride again then, in the destined upcoming fall, and spur together. 28 We shall ride again then, 29 in the destined upcoming fall, 30 and spur together. - 4年前 张若轩 更改了诗歌正文
旧版本 新版本 15 for love dropping inevitably as fallen leaves, 15 for love dropping inevitably as fallen leaves, 16 yet leaving e verything climbing days and nights;16 yet leaving something climbing days and nights; 17 as prayers bending over tamely 17 as prayers bending over tamely - 4年前 张若轩 更改了诗歌正文
旧版本 新版本 2 without your gazing from my eyes this time, 2 without your gazing from my eyes this time, 3 I start wondering if this is the end, then why 3 I see black horses still chewing on the grass. 4 there is something germinating all the time. 4 If this is the end of us, l start wondering, 5 then why some parts of you start to germinate as a whole. 5 6 17 in the hands of Jesus, sweetly and quietly, 18 in the hands of Jesus, sweetly and quietly, 19 pressing on to take hold of the whole, 18 without sweeping or mourning. 20 without sweeping or mourning. - 4年前 张若轩 添加了初始版本